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✎ FR Urgent!!! Cherche quelqu'un pour corriger fautes d'anglais
    

Discussão em 'United Kingdom' iniciado por priscilla83480, 1/10/12.

  1. priscilla83480

    priscilla83480 New Member

    Afiliado:
    1/10/12
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    2
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    Sexo:
    Feminino
    Cidade:
    Puget sur argens
    País:
    França
    Nacionalidade:
    Francês (FR)
    Linguagem:
    Francais
    Bonjour, je rempli mon dossier pour etre fille au pair 6 mois en Irlande et on me demande de faire une presentation ecrite, mon niveau d'anglais etant assez faible, si quelqu'un pouvais me corriger les fautes ca serai génial
    Priscilla :)

    Hello, My name is Priscilla and my familiy name is Canales. (I've not nickname).
    I'm Eighteen years old and I live in France. I was born in Fréjus on 24 July 1994. I Enjoy listenning music, Travel and going to the cinema. Every Weekend, I go out with my friends. I have got two sisters ( they aee twin sisters). I have got two cats and one rabbit, It's very nice !
    I've blond curly hair and brown eyed ? I'm of medium seize ?
    In June 2012, I obtained my diplôme to work with chlidren and the elderly.
    When I speak English, I will work in a pharmacy. I also diplôme first aid.
    I love taking care of children, I already do internships in nurserie and on saturday and sunday morning I keep child.
    My parents say I am kind serious and dynamic.
    I hope to meet you very soon, and discover your country!
     
    #1 priscilla83480, 1/10/12
  2. texkourgan

    texkourgan Addicted member
    Networker Editor

    Afiliado:
    29/1/08
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    7,051
    Curtidas Recebidas:
    17
    Sexo:
    Feminino
    Cidade:
    Berlin
    País:
    Alemanha
    Nacionalidade:
    Americano (US)
    Linguagem:
    English, a little Deutsch
    Hi Priscilla-
    I understand you want your English to be looked over. It is really very good! To make it most natural - here are my corrections:

    Good luck!
     
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    #2 texkourgan, 2/10/12
  3. priscilla83480

    priscilla83480 New Member

    Afiliado:
    1/10/12
    Mensagens:
    2
    Curtidas Recebidas:
    0
    Sexo:
    Feminino
    Cidade:
    Puget sur argens
    País:
    França
    Nacionalidade:
    Francês (FR)
    Linguagem:
    Francais
    Thank you very much !!
     
    #3 priscilla83480, 2/10/12
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